As the night throws on its cloak,
Some unusual thoughts woke…
Thoughts having lows and highs,
Thoughts travelling beyond the sky…
The tiny stars twinkle in delight,
Seeing the thoughts which came that night…
Thoughts which wandered here and there,
Thoughts which went everywhere…
Quietly the wind blows,
Along the thoughts it flows…
Inevitably the thoughts came to you,
Why? Even I have no clue…
When did we last talk they ask,
Horror makes my face go in a rigid mask…
I never realized that it had been that long,
Unheard like that long lost song…
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~ by Mehul Sharma on December 19, 2009.
Posted in friendship, love, relationships, thoughts
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I bow to thee… Amazing!
PS… You could consider changing the font, it’s a little difficult to read…
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Rishabh?
a nice comment? thankssssss!
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oh n i updated it now, better?
AWESOME! 😀
They are frickin amazing!
😀 thnks!!!!
might i make some corrections??
check out the first 2 lines…
the tenses clash.
try ‘threw’
and ‘twinkled’
btw the 2nd paragraph should be revised…
apologies for being so blunt but it may help you become a better poet…
a good one you already are though.